【2021高考英语真题】书面表达+满分范文全汇总_兄弟(2021高考英语卷)

原标题：【2021高考英语真题】书面表达+满分范文全汇总


【2021·全国ⅰ卷】

假定你是李华，你的新西兰兄弟terry将去我国兄弟家做客，发邮件向你问询有关风俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 抵达时刻；

2. 适合的礼物；

3. 餐桌礼仪。

留心：

1. 词数100支配；

2. 可以恰当添加细节，以使行文联接。

【满分范文】

dear terry,

how are you doing? in your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a chinese friend’s home. now, i am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

to begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a chinese knot. what’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.

hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. i have the confidence that you will have a great time.

best wishes!

yours,

li hua

【2021·全国ⅱ卷】

你受学生会托付为校宣传栏“英语六合”写一则告诉，请我们观看一部英语短片growing together，内容包括：

1. 短片内容：学校的打开；

2. 放映时刻、地址；

3. 等待对短片提出定见。

留心：

1. 词数100支配；

2. 可以恰当添加细节，以使行文联接。

【满分范文】

notice

in order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding english short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on june 9th. it is organized by the student union. here are some relevant details about it.

to begin with, the name of the movie is growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school. as we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. what’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

the student unionjune

【2021·全国iii卷】

假定你是李华，你的英国兄弟peter 来信问询你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1. 学校的体育场馆；

2. 首要的运动项目；

3. 你喜爱的项目。

留心：

1. 词数100支配：

2. 可以恰当添加细节，以使行文联接。

【解析】

本题作文为提纲式作文，方法仍然是函件，即给英国兄弟peter介绍学校体育运动情况，归于学校日子论题。这一论题贴合学生日子的实践，学生并不陌生，有话可说。

【满分范文】

dear peter,

i am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. you asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

to begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. as for me, i’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

all in all, i sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

yours,

li hua

【2021·北京卷·第一节】

假定你是红星大学高三学生李华，你的英国兄弟jim在给你的邮件中说到他对我国文明感快乐喜爱，方案下一年来北京上大学。他向你征询有关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

1. 标明等待；

2. 举荐他上哪所大学；

3. 主张他做哪些预备作业。

留心：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 最初和结束已给出，不计入总词数。

dear jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

yours,

li hua

【满分范文】

dear jim,

i’m so glad to hear your future education plan in beijing in your last letter. first i would like to express my warmest welcome to you and i am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in beijing.

learning your keen interest in chinese culture, i suggest you apply for peking university, one of the best universities in china. its chinese literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in chinese profound history and rich culture. as for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like the story of the stone while some online courses of spoken chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the chinese language environment.

i sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in beijing when that day comes. if you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

yours,

li hua

【2021·北京卷·第二节】

假定你是红星大学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后次序，写一篇英文周记，记叙你们上星期招待外国学生，带领他们领会我国茶文明的全进程。

留心：词数不少于60。



【满分范文】

last week, we took the foreign stude

nts in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.

on arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. i gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, i then began to teach them how to make tea.

in order to deliver a clear presentation, i slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.

next came the moment when i asked them to have a try themselves. washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. the tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.

at the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. it suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. and i swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.

【2021·浙江卷·第一节】 使用文写作

假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘自愿者，招待来访的国外大学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

1. 口语才能：

2. 有关经历；

3. 应聘意图。

留心：

1. 词数80支配；

2. 可以恰当添加细节，以使行文联接。

【满分范文】

dear sir or madam,

my name is li hua. and i am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school english association.　　

i have a good command of english and have been to the usa twice. so i can communicate well with native speakers of english. what’s more, i am kind and friendly to other people. so i can easily get along with foreign students.

i’m particularly interested in this job because i want to further improve my oral english capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.

hopefully i can receive your acceptance.

yours faithfully,

li hua

【2021·浙江卷·第二节】读后续写

阅览下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个无缺的故事。

it was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. he decided to take me on a trip to the wild west.

we took a plane to albuquerque, a big city in the state of new mexico. we reached albuquerque in the late afternoon. uncle paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in pecos.

his wife tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons ryan and kyle. my dad and i spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. very early in the morning, uncle paul woke us up to have breakfast. 'the day starts at dawn on my farm,' he said. after breakfast, i went to help aunt tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with uncle paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). i was impressed to see my dad and uncle paul riding horses. they looked really cool.

in the afternoon, i asked uncle paul if i could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. i wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. so, my dad and i put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. 'don’t be late for supper,' uncle paul cried, 'and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!' 'ok! ' my dad cried back. after a while uncle paul and his fam house were out of sight. it was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. it looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.

suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

留心：

（1）所续写短文的词数应为150支配；

（2）至少运用5个短文中标有下划线的要害词语：

（3）续写有些分为两段，每段的最初语已为你写好；

（4）续写结束后，请用下划线标出你所运用的要害词语。

paragraph 1: suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

paragraph 2: we had no idea where we were and it was getting dark._______________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

【满分范文】

paragraph 1

suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. instinctively, i yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and i did as told. finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.

paragraph 2

we had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. time appeared to be merrier and shorter when i stayed together with dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. what a thrilling but memorable experience it was!

【2021·天津卷】

假定你是晨光大学的机器人快乐喜爱小组组长李津，你的美国兄弟chris就读于天津某世界学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你方案聘请他参加你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举办的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表快乐喜爱小组给他写一封电子邮件。

（1）竞赛的时刻、地址；

（2）聘请他的缘由；

（3）练习方案将发送其邮箱，请他提出主张。

留心：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可恰当参加细节，使内容充分、行文联接；

（3）最初和结束已给出，不计入总词数。

【参阅词汇】

世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the world adolescent robotics competition

dear chris,

i have good news to tell you.

i’m looking forward to your reply.

yours,

li jin

【满分范文】

dear chris,

i have good news to tell you. targeted at cultivating the teenagers’ interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the world adolescent robotics competition, will take place in the children’s palace tianjin in the late july. the competition offers adolescents a good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each other meanwhile.

i am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. as far as i know, you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous competitions. impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this field, i am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. by working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring others' strong points as well as double our achievements.

if you are interested in it, please let me know and i will deliver the training program to your online mailbox. it would be fantastic if you could bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. i’m looking forward to your reply.

yours,

li jin

【2021·江苏卷】

请阅览下面文字,并依照需求用英语写一篇150 词支配的文章。




li jiang 6 july, sunny
our family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. two days ago, mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. but the information i got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. confused, i simply based my decision on the ratings. within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. this afternoon, mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.







su hua 6 july, sunny
this morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. we found a rating of the top ten restaurants, and went into one of them. we spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. i was puzzled. should i believe in these ratings, or should i not?




【写作内容】

1. 用约30个词归纳上述使用排名（ratings）进行花费的表象；

2. 谈谈你如何看待花费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

【写作需求】

1. 写作进程中不能直接引证原文语句；

2. 作文中不能呈现真实名字和学校称号；

3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容无缺，言语标准，语篇联接，词数恰当。

【满分范文一】

as a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.

i tend to consult consumption ratings whatever i purchase. firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. based on the ratings, i bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. for example, there are huge amounts of reference books which i am often confused to choose from. in that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.

there is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. the advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. it is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.

【满分范文二】

nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. these ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. however, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

there is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. as we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. it has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.

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